Approved Planet Helgard, Devil's Frozen Bulwark

[BobertEZ]

Right, sorry. Fixed the links, updated the format, reworded various sections, added two new cities, and increased the planetary population John Locke

 

[Zak Dymo]

Approved, pending secondary.

 

[John Locke]

Zak Dymo | BobertEZ

APPROVED

 

[Srina Talon]

Submission Name: Dotouk, The Phoenix's Laboratory
Link to Submission: X
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Rework anything and everything to my current main characters after the death of this one.

Submission Name: Helgard, The Wolf's Den
Link to Submission: X
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Rework anything and everything to my current main characters after the death of this one.

Submission Name: Helgardi, The Warrior Poets
Link to Submission: X
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Rework anything and everything to my current main characters after the death of this one.

Submission Name: Hjallaheim, The Wolf's Cave
Link to Submission: X
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Rework anything and everything to my current main characters after the death of this one.

Submission Name: Dotouki, The Machinists
Link to Submission: X
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Rework anything and everything to my current main characters after the death of this one.

 

[BobertEZ]

Srina Talon Ready for Judging I think! Changes include adding some new cities, giving ownership of this planet to Kascalion, and changing affiliation to Kas and the Dread Empire.

 

[Fevris Derzelas]

Under Review.
BobertEZ

 

[Fevris Derzelas]

Hello! I will be reviewing you submission. Since this is a planet submission, it will require secondary approval.

Everything looks in order to me here. Great work!

APPROVED PENDING SECONDARY
BobertEZ
Srina Talon John Locke Allyson Locke

 

[Srina Talon]

Kascalion Giedfield | Fevris Derzelas

Good work! [APPROVED]