Approved Tech H&H Last Word

[Sal Katarn]

[SIZE=10.6667px] http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz89/Tycho_photos/erron-black-mkx-concept-art-weapons_2.jpg[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=10.6667px]Image Source: Erron Black Concept Art[/SIZE]​

“A good slug rifle, keep ‘em wiped and oiled, they last forever.”​

-Shatterpoint​

​

Intent: Custom order rifle for Sal Katarn.
Development Thread: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/81048-lonesome-gods/ - Kills Maalraas | http://starwarsrp.net/topic/81123-one-for-the-money-two-for-the-showopen/ - Sal is justly humiliated
Manufacturer: Houk & Herglic
Model: H&H "Last Word" Rifle
Affiliation: Sal Katarn
Modularity: No
Production: Production: Unique
Material: Maalraas bone, Dallorian alloy
Classification: Slugthrower
Size: Rifle
Length: 960mm
Weight: 3.1kg
Ammunition Type:
Type 1 - .48 Energy Shrouded Slugs
Type 2 - .48 Hollowed Slugs (Acid)
Type 3 - 12 Gauge Scattergun Shells
Ammunition Capacity: 8 rounds
Effective Range: 182 meters (Scatter Shell = 50 meters)
Rate of Fire: Lever action
Special Features:
Lightsaber Resistant
Description:
The Last Word is a rifle similar in appearance to the Tusken Cycler. It fires an energy enshrouded .48 caliber round. The exact same as that used by the Enforcer pistol. The round is capable of penetrating heavy armor and disabling light vehicles. If up against Mandalorian iron, or phrik the Last Word will not penetrate, but will cause a fist-sized dent in the armor. The impact and subsequent concaving of the armor could cause great kinetic damage on the wearer, breaking bones and damaging organs even if the slug never penetrated the armor itself, since the force of impact would be equivalent to a direct impact from a mace wielded by a Houk, giving the Last Word immense stopping power.

Alternatively, the Last Word can be loaded with slugs based on the KD-30 Dissuader’s ammunition, which are filled with acid capable of eating through armor, flesh and bone.

The stock and the lower half of the barrel have a Maalraas bone frame, rendering those sections resistant to lightsabers.

The drawbacks are the slow rate of fire and the low ammunition capacity.

Canon Source:
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/.48-caliber_Enforcer_pistol

 

[Jorus Merrill]

RESEARCH REVIEW
-----
Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
------
Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
------
WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
------
WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
------
SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Jorus Merrill]

[member="Sal Katarn"]

Looks good. Two things:

• Most of your description involves ammo in one way or another -- energy envelopes slugs, or the acid stuff. Can you add more of that detail to the Ammunition Type line?
• Dev threads have to be ten posts; yours appears to be four. Gotta either split your long posts up or add some more.

 

[Sal Katarn]

[member="Jorus Merrill"] -

Fixed the ammo line, I think.
Added in a thread where Sal gets tossed around like a bag of potatoes. Don't know if that counts.

 

[Jorus Merrill]

[member="Sal Katarn"]

An individual thread has to be at least ten posts, but screw it - this isn't the kind of thing that needs a dev thread anyway.

 

[Jorus Merrill]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.