Javek Tysis
Balanced
This man here needs some outsider’s eyes to critique Javek's Bio. Now, it was a lengthy process creating his backstory. Back when I first created this guy, I actually spent my two off days of work brainstorming. And since I’d like to improve my storytelling abilities for scripting and such, I’d like it if a few of you guys took a look at it.
Any and all tips and personal opinions on it are welcome. (I mean, but geez, don’t be too harsh about it. I might just cry myself to sleep.)
Here’s the link to the Bio: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/61497-javek-tysis/#entry916345
Any and all tips and personal opinions on it are welcome. (I mean, but geez, don’t be too harsh about it. I might just cry myself to sleep.)
Here’s the link to the Bio: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/61497-javek-tysis/#entry916345