Jedi Mom
OK, here we go, what do you guys think of Nef? Be honest, and please refrain from generic "You rock/You suck" statements. These do nothing to help me improve as a writer.
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Feedback/Critique: Nefertari Sovint
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Lord Commander
She reminds me somewhat of the very classical style of Jedi knights and has an aura of "Old School". Your writing is phenomenal and Nef kicks butt! Gotta see more of her around.
Padawan Menace
So much like!
I'm constantly surprised by your writing. I think I'll have some idea where the story is headed, and then you'll go and write something that I had never even considered. You've put a lot of depth into creating not only Nef as a character, but she'd so well fleshed out with setting and history. The more we wrote together, the more I came to know the supporting cast around your character. And the more I went through your profile and other threads to understand the wealth of references and backstory behind her.
Plus, you're very active and helpful to new writers and characters, as I've both experienced and benefited from myself.
So, as much as you're not wanting comments that are just "you rock"... I've got to say: YOU ROCK!
And you rock hard. :3
I'm constantly surprised by your writing. I think I'll have some idea where the story is headed, and then you'll go and write something that I had never even considered. You've put a lot of depth into creating not only Nef as a character, but she'd so well fleshed out with setting and history. The more we wrote together, the more I came to know the supporting cast around your character. And the more I went through your profile and other threads to understand the wealth of references and backstory behind her.
Plus, you're very active and helpful to new writers and characters, as I've both experienced and benefited from myself.
So, as much as you're not wanting comments that are just "you rock"... I've got to say: YOU ROCK!
And you rock hard. :3
Jedi Mom
(bump. Come on, Chaos! I know you have more in you.)