Approved Lore Force X

[Albrecht F. Herlock]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a small task force inside of House Haskler and the Empire Navies
• Image Credit: Here
• Permissions: Here, here, here and here
• Links:
  • Commodore Albrecht Herlock
  • Commander Richthofen
  • Lieutenant Jack Daniel
  • Lieutenant Commander Julius Emil Mannerheim
  • Lieutenant Commander James Halsey
  • Dalness Manufacturings & Shipbuilding
  • Legate-class battlecruiser
  • Pellaeon IV-class star destroyer
  • Harrier-class heavy cruiser
  • New Imperial-I class star destroyer
  • Cuirassier-class cruiser
  • Valiant-class star destroyer
  • Katana-class heavy cruiser
  • Onager II-class star destroyer
  • Tacitus-class planetary invasion carrier
  • X100-class escort frigate
  • House Haskler of Anaxes
  • New Imperial Order
  • Stealth Corvette Silencieux
  • Lieutenant Lucas Traumen
  • DM&S-97 Dropship
  • TIE/Vx Viper
  • Rei-sen type carrier starfighter
  • Hayabusa-type escort starfighter

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Fleet Name: Force X
• Classification: task force
• Affiliation: House Haskler of Anaxes (mainly) | New Imperial Order
• Fleet Symbol: This one --->
• Description: Task Force 58 is a fleet composed of 26 ships and placed under Commodore Herlock's command, who receives his orders directly from the Imperial Navy Command

SOCIAL INFORMATION

• Headquarters: Dalness Manufacturings & Shipbuilding dockyard
• Ports of Call: N/A (Classified informations)
• Goals: Escort large fleets, support deployed ground forces, patrol in the House Haskler's territory.
• Reputation: This fleet is known only by the high ranking officers of the House Haskler of Anaxes and New Imperial Order.

COMPOSITION INFORMATION

• Fleet Size: Small
• Lead Ship: Legate-class battlecruiser X01 AIV Nouvelle-Anaxes
• Composition:
  • AIV Nouvelle-Anaxes (Legate-class battlecruiser) Identification number X01
  • AIV Napoléon Bonaparte (Pellaeon IV-class star destroyer) Identification number X131
  • AIV Maréchal Davout (Pellaeon IV-class star destroyer) Identification number X132
  • AIV Maréchal Lannes (Pellaeon IV-class star destroyer) Identification number X133
  • AIV Robert Surcouf (New Imperial-I class star destroyer) Identification number X161
  • AIV Jean Bart (New Imperial-I class star destroyer) Identification number X162
  • AIV Dixmude (Onager II-class star destroyer) Identification number X121
  • AIV Montfaucon (Onager II-class heavy cruiser) Identification number X122
  • AIV Passchendaele (Onager II-class heavy cruiser) Identification number X123
  • AIV L'Effroyable (Harrier-class heavy cruiser) Identification number X141
  • AIV Le Téméraire (Harrier-class haevy cruiser) Identification number X142
  • AIV L'Indomptable (Harrier-class heavy cruiser) Identification number X143
  • AIV Le Malin (Harrier-class heavy cruiser) Identification number X144
  • AIV Forbin (Cuirassier-class cruiser) Identification number X151
  • AIV Cassard (Cuirassier-class cruiser) Identification number X152
  • AIV Camerone (Cuirassier-class cruiser) Identification number X153
  • AIV Koufra (Valiant-class star destroyer) Identification number X171
  • AIV Bir Hakeim (Valiant-class star destroyer) Identification number X172
  • AIV Primauguet (X100-class escort frigate) Identification number X104
  • AIV Lamotte Picquet (X100-class escort frigate) Identification number X105
  • AIV Latouche Tréville (X100-class escort frigate) Identification number X106
  • AIV Caffarelli (Tacitus-class planetary invasion carrier) Identification number X191
  • AIV Tourville (Tacitus-class planetary invasion carrier) Identification number X192
  • AIV Athos (Katana-class heavy cruiser) Identification number X111
  • AIV Portos (Katana-class heavy cruiser) Identification number X112
  • AIV Aramis (Katana-class heavy cruiser) Identification number X113
  • AIV Silencieux (stealth corvette) Identification number X205
  • 792 TIE/Vx Viper starfighters
  • 276 DM&S-97 dropships
  • 36 Hayabusa-type escort starfighters
  • 6 Rei-sen type carrier starfighters

MEMBERS

• Commodore Herlock, commanding officer of the Nouvelle-Anaxes and head of the task force (playable character)
• Commander Richthofen, commanding officer of the Napoléon Bonaparte and commanding officer in second of the task force (playable character)
• Lieutenant Commander Mannerheim, commanding officer of the Maréchal Davout (NPC)
• Lieutenant Commander Halsey, commanding officer of the Maréchal Lannes (NPC)
• Captain Tycho Yularen, commanding officer of the Bir Hakeim
• Lieutenant Lucas Traumen, commanding officer of the stealth corvette Silencieux (NPC)
• Lieutenant Jack Daniel, head of the fighters squadron Fortis (playable character)

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
This task force was created by Albrecht Herlock. Its creation became effective during the battle over Csilla when the Audacious, the Courageous and the Foudroyant came out of hyperpsace and their cammanding officers placed themselves under Herlock's command whereas the Silencieux is an experimental ship. All the commanding officers in this task force are close friends from Anaxes' Naval Academy.



List of changes:

• Replaced the Foudroyant-class carrier by the newly built Tonnant-class carrier
• Added another squadron of dropships due to the new carrier capacity
• Added a new starfighter squadron

List of changes V.2:

• Added a new class of ships along with the permission to use them (Harrier-class heavy cruiser)
• Added four ships to the fleet (AIV L'Effroyable, AIV Le Téméraire, AIV L'Indomptable, AIV Le Malin)
• Added 48 dropships due to the new cruiser capacity

List of changes V.3:

• Replaced the outdated X100-class escort frigates and Tonnant-class fleet carrier by the Katana-class heavy cruiser
• Added 6 classes of ships (Legate-class battlecruiser; Pellaeon IV-class star destroyer; New Imperial-I class star destroyer; Onager II-class Star Destroyer; Cuirassier-class cruiser; Valiant-class star destryer; Katana-class heavy cruiser)
• Added new ships to the fleet :
  • AIV Napoléon Bonaparte
  • AIV Maréchal Davout
  • AIV Maréchal Lannes
  • AIV Robert Surcouf
  • AIV Jean Bart
  • AIV Dixmude
  • AIV Montfaucon
  • AIV Passchendaele
  • AIV Forbin
  • AIV Cassard
  • AIV Camerone
  • AIV Koufra
  • AIV Bir Hakeim
  • AIV Athos
  • AIV Portos
  • AIV Aramis
• Increased the number of starfighters and support crafts

List of changes V.4 :

• Renamed the whole fleet (Anaxes Navy Task Force 58 --> Force X)
• Replaced the sigil
• Renamed the falgship (AIV Napoléon Bonaparte --> AIV Nouvelle-Anaxes)
• Added a new Pellaeon-IV class Star Destroyer
• Added 2 classes of ships (Tacitus-class planetary invasion carrier and X100-class escort frigate)
• Added new ships to the fleet :
  • AIV Napoléon Bonaparte
  • AIV Primauguet
  • AIV Lamotte Picquet
  • AIV Latouche Tréville
  • AIV Caffarelli
  • AIV Tourville
• Added 2 types of starfighters (Rei-sen type carrier starfighter and Hayabusa-type escort starfighter)
• Added identification numbers to all the ships

 

[Onansi of Thyrsus]

Under Review

 

[Albrecht F. Herlock]

Onansi of Thyrsus for your information, I just added a new ship and a new NPC. This will be my last edit until this sub is judged.

Regards

 

[Onansi of Thyrsus]

Approved.

 

[Srina Talon]

Submission Name: Anaxes Navy Task Force 58
Link to Submission: here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: I'm going to replace one of the ships and add a new fighter in this Task Force

Don't forget to include a list of changes. You can tag a member of Codex Staff and or use the "Ready for Judgment" tab when you're ready.

 

[Albrecht F. Herlock]

Srina Talon my edits are made, it is ready for live judgement

 

[Onansi of Thyrsus]

Approved.

 

[Collector]

Pre-Codex Template:

Submission Name: Anaxes Navy Task Force 58
Link to Submission: here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: I will be adding a few ships to the fleet.

Moved per request.

Do be sure to include a list of changes when this is ready for review.

 

[Albrecht F. Herlock]

Collector edits are done, this sub is ready for live judgement

 

[The Mongrel]

Under Review Albrecht F. Herlock

Changes look good overall. In your change list, could you please give the name of the new class of ship you added, and link to it? I'm not sure which one is the new one. Please also give the names of the other four new ships.

 

[Albrecht F. Herlock]

The Mongrel it's all done.

 

[The Mongrel]

Albrecht F. Herlock

Great, thanks! Approved.

 

[Srina Talon]

CODEX MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Anaxes Navy Task Force 58
Link to Submission: here
Reason for Moving to Codex Modification: I wish to replace some of the ships and starfighters and add some new ships.

 

[Albrecht F. Herlock]

Srina Talon edits are done, the sub is ready for live judgement once again

 

[Srina Talon]

Albrecht F. Herlock

Hi there - There are a few things that need to be adjusted before I can re-approve this.

1.) Image Credit: You need to link Rockstar's Emblem editor. You may have done the editing but you did not create the images used.

2.) The New Imperial Order is now known as The Empire. Since you have pulled this submission for edits you should also adjust references to the NIO so that it reflects the current timeline. You could say "The Empire formerly known as the NIO" at the top in intent to avoid confusion with permissions. The reason I say this is because newer members won't know the NIO anymore and will be very confused when they click a link and wind up on The Empire's home page.

3.) You MUST remove the link in permissions that goes to the NIO Manifest. That manifest cannot be used in submissions at all for a variety of reasons, but, you do have individual permissions linked so you're safe there. You can't link to anything within faction forums as factions can be locked and unless the member or judge is part of that faction they won't be able to see it. The reference to the manifest from the end of the submission should be removed as well.

Tag me when this is updated and I'll get you on your way.

Thank you!

 

[Albrecht F. Herlock]

Srina Talon this should be ok now.

 

[Srina Talon]

Albrecht F. Herlock

All right - You're good to go. [Re-Approved]

 

[Srina Talon]

CODEX MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Anaxes Navy Task Force 58
Link to Submission: here
Reason for Moving to Codex Modification: I wish to add some new ships, rename one of the already existent ship and rename the whole fleet

 

[Albrecht F. Herlock]

Srina Talon edits are done, this is ready for live judgement once again

 

[Srina Talon]

Albrecht F. Herlock

The changes seem to check out - When you want me to review something though please be sure to tag me in a new post. Tags don't go through when you edit posts so this was sitting for a little bit because I thought you were still making modifications. It's not a big deal, just delayed a little for you.

[Re-Approved]